Haiku—Interactive Poems

Poetry, especially the Japanese haiku, reminds me of interactive games and media. Haiku can change or reflect our moods. The haiku forms a framework and allows us to imagine the scene and interpret the meaning from their own experiences.

Bashō, a seventeenth-century Japanese poet, has written some of my favorite haiku. In fact, my Japanese novels feature this one:

Simple pepper pods

Add gossamer wings to them

Behold: dragonflies

(The Japanese original has the expected format of 5 syllables for the first line, seven for the second, and five again for the third, so I modified my translation slightly to fit the format.) What meaning would you give to this poem? A child’s play? A humorous look at dragonflies? According to the experts, Bashō was expressing that all things are one in their essence. But the poems are meant for enjoyment, and we are free to insert our own ideas.

The themes of traditional haiku center on nature and the four seasons. They convey a keen awareness of an emotion and may hint at a philosophy of life. One theme often repeated is the fleeting nature of beautiful things. When you think of beauty, what comes to mind? The gorgeous cherry blossoms, which last for about a week, are beloved symbols to many Japanese people of what is treasured, but too short-lived. Sōchō, another well-known poet, wrote:

Throughout the morning

I watch the cherry blossoms

Growing old.

A little sad, wouldn’t you say? But where did the blossoms’ beauty originate? The wonderful fact is that the cherry tree’s Designer is eternal. Not only flowers, but also rainbows, music, snow-covered mountains, starry skies, brilliant sunsets are just a little taste of true beauty—a gift from the Giver, the eternal Artist. God designed the cherry tree’s first tiny seed with all the information crammed inside: directions for the roots, bark, trunk, leaves (think of the photosynthesis’ complexity), flowers, and delicious fruit. How wonderful that when we seek to know God through Jesus, we can have an everlasting relationship with the Giver of such beauty!

While writing this post, I tried my hand at creating haiku. Obviously, I’m an amateur. Anyway, here’s the one I wrote:

Jagged mountain peaks

Puncture the risk-taking clouds

Snow covers my path

Perhaps you can catch a glimpse of the traveler’s wintry scene and the tongue-in-cheek connection between the peaks and the clouds. Have you written any haiku? If so, I hope you will share one in the comment area below.

Photo of the dragonfly by Shawn Kenessey on Unsplash.